Forums: RESIDENT ABRAMS.

Hey guys, I am just finishing the script fror my first film, Resident Abrams. Here is a synopsis, tell me what you think;

In a world of greed and injustice, Rudolph Abrams II is America's favorite son. He is a weathy figure who uses his power status to help those less fortunate. When he dies, Hollywood editor Louis Reese is hired to edit hours upon hours of recorded footage to create a short memorial film to be shown at Abram's funeral. The project sounds like Reese's big break, until he discovers a reel of film that reveals Abrams' darkest secret......a secret that could destroy Abrams' reputation forever. Now, Louis must make a decision- show the world the shocking truth about their idol, or let the secret be lost forever......

Resident Abrams is an intelligent, beautifully shot drama about the transformative-and destructive-power of film.

Cool you even put in your own pre-emptive blurb. 8)

I'd really appreciate some feedback guys.....

Thanks!

I'd really appreciate some feedback guys.....

Thanks!
Yh I Think its good

sounds similar to a small film i once saw, i think it was titled "Citizen Kane". I dont know if you've ever heard of it, it's pretty good though, you should check it out.

seriously, it sounds waaay to similar to Citizen Kane, you should change some stuff.

I think that it also sound like Final cut